3/15

Today we had a discussion in class. We sat in groups and conversed over our projects. I showed my scripts to someone in my class. I have 2 scripts for the film opening, the first script I wrote I did not like because It made the Weston boss and his accomplice look way too soft. I want to portray the Weston bosses who is tough, but not as tough as the out of town boss shooting him up. The second script shows the Weston pair as someone who knows whats going on but can't do anything about it.

I gave my second to Mathias to peer review my script. "very original and makes everything feel so real," is what he had to say about my script.